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PostSubject: the first written by me!! the magic tree   the first written by me!! the magic tree I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 22, 2010 2:44 pm

once there was a poor family there house was taken away by a flood all they had left was a tree it was a cherry blossom tree once the little boy jack found out that his parents Mary and tom were sick and they needed to be cured so he went to ask for money when a magician passed buy and gave him some seeds and told him to mix them from the cherries on his tree so he did he gave the mixture to his parents and they became as fine as ever but they still had a problem it was that they were still very poor and all hey had left was a few cherries. the boy went and sat under the tree wen he hears a sigh so he looks around him but there was nothing then he hears a voice telling him i can grant u 3 wishes he looks around all there was was that old useless tree when he sees tree blinking the tree say hm... yes yes I'm a talking tree don't be afraid I'm going to help you eat all my cherries make a wish and put one of my flowers in the ground and chop me off so he did what he said and wished to live a very dissent life and his wish was granted and they lived happily ever after!!![center]
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PostSubject: Re: the first written by me!! the magic tree   the first written by me!! the magic tree I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 22, 2010 3:31 pm

NanoLita wrote:
once there was a poor family there house was taken away by a flood all they had left was a tree it was a cherry blossom tree once the little boy jack found out that his parents Mary and tom were sick and they needed to be cured so he went to ask for money when a magician passed buy and gave him some seeds and told him to mix them from the cherries on his tree so he did he gave the mixture to his parents and they became as fine as ever but they still had a problem it was that they were still very poor and all they had left was a few cherries. the boy went and sat under the tree when he hears a sigh so he looks around him but there was nothing then he hears a voice telling him i can grant u 3 wishes he looks around all there was was that old useless tree when he sees tree blinking the tree say hm... yes yes I'm a talking tree don't be afraid I'm going to help you eat all my cherries make a wish and put one of my flowers in the ground and chop me off so he did what he said and wished to live a very dissent life and his wish was granted and they lived happily ever after!!![center]

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thank you samoora i hope u liked it very well this story is to teach ppl never sleep on trees because he got irritated Razz:P:P hahaha
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Interesting choice of topic Smile

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PostSubject: Re: the first written by me!! the magic tree   the first written by me!! the magic tree I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 22, 2010 8:43 pm

thanx ledol
i hope u liked it


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PostSubject: Re: the first written by me!! the magic tree   the first written by me!! the magic tree I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 22, 2010 8:58 pm

Once there was a poor family their house was taken away by the flood. All they had left was a cherry blossom tree. One day the little boy Jack found out that his parents Mary and Tom were sick and they needed to be cured; so he went to ask for money when a magician passed by, gave him some seeds and told him to mix them with the cherries on his tree. He did then he gave the mixture to his parents and they became as fine as ever. Still, they had a major problem and it was the fact that they were still very poor. On top of that, all they had left was a few cherries. The boy sat under the tree thinking of their problem, while he was there, he heard a sigh. He looked around him but there was nothing out of the ordinary. Then he heard a voice saying, "I can grant u 3 wishes!" He looked around once more and all there was that he could see was that old useless tree. He saw the tree blinking the tree said to him... "yes, yes, I'm a talking tree! Don't be afraid I'm going to help you eat all my cherries. Make a wish, then put one of my flowers in the ground and chop me off!" The boy did as he was told, and wished to live a very decent life. To his astonishment, his wish was granted and they lived happily ever after!!!


I edited your wonderful story.
You have potential as a good story writer, all you need is a lot of practice and editing to perfect your abilities
Good luck Sweetheart
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PostSubject: Re: the first written by me!! the magic tree   the first written by me!! the magic tree I_icon_minitimeFri Apr 23, 2010 9:23 am



Our Young Writer

Thank you for sharing this Story with us


Keep Writing ... You're gonna be a great writer someday


Best of Luck Babe
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PostSubject: Re: the first written by me!! the magic tree   the first written by me!! the magic tree I_icon_minitimeSat Apr 24, 2010 3:44 am

thanx moons tears for the editing

and thank you marvy i hope u all liked it

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